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打造雅思小作文完美長句
如何在雅思寫作中寫出漂亮的長句一直是廣大考生關(guān)心的問題，本文描述的是如何通過七個步驟，將一個只有主謂結(jié)構(gòu)的簡單句變成一個漂亮的復(fù)雜句，相信一定會對正在備考雅思考試寫作的同學(xué)們有所幫助。
一、大家先寫出一個簡單句，只有主謂結(jié)構(gòu)，即Basic Fact ( subject + verb )
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased.
二、添加數(shù)詞Numbers
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.
三、什么時間?When?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
四、數(shù)字是準(zhǔn)確的嗎?Exactly this number?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
五、添加一個副詞Add an adverb
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
六、以名詞結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)述Rephrase with a noun
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
現(xiàn)在我們有了一個33個單詞的漂亮的長句子~NOW WE HAVE A 33 WORDS, GOOD LONG SENTENCE~
七、現(xiàn)在我們嘗試以名詞開頭來重寫這個句子。Can we begin with a noun?
The number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
改寫成：
There was a dramatic increase in the number of Japanese tourists who travelled abroad from just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)37個單詞啦!37 words now!我不建議寫得更長了，its a nice long sentence~
總結(jié)：
寫長句子時常用的7個步驟Here are the 7 steps we used：
1. Basic Fact
2. Number
3. When?
4. Exactly this number?
5. Add an adverb
6. Rephrase with a noun
7. Can we begin with a noun?
以上就是手把手7步走教你在雅思小作文中寫出完美長句的全部內(nèi)容，大家都get到了嗎?祝各位考生都能考出理想的分?jǐn)?shù)!
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