高考英語(yǔ)作文：On Equality
On Equality
In the days when a woman's entire obligation was to be a good daughter， a good wife and a good mother， men and women were far from equal。 Women suffered sexual discrimination until the so-called feminism came into being。 Nowadays， feminism has been running for over a century。 Result? It ran into the extreme of "equality" from my perspective。
Most of us agree that men and women should enjoy equality in this modern society。 But what on earth does this equality mean? To be "equal"， those for feminism would like to share everything with men they split bills， apply for masculine jobs，etc。 They intended to buy in all the advantages and disadvantages of being a man。 On their long journey to the "equal world"，they've forgotten some basic facts they ARE women。 Even school children know that women， after all， are different from men both physically and mentally。 It is unwise， or even stupid，to ignore all these differences and pursue a so called "equal world"。 We couldn't expect a man to give birth to a baby as we couldn't expect the sun to rise in the west。 Likewise， we couldn't expect a woman to become the world's fastest runner，as is simple， but seems forgotten by those feminists。
Equality is not bisecting everything。 Real equality should be built upon the common sense of the basic sexual differences。Since some of the jobs can only be done well enough by men，women should not feel discriminated when we fail。 After all，there're also some jobs， which can only be perfectly done with women's hands。 These are not symbols of inequality， but natural laws。 What really counts is equality in rights， reputation，etc。 Only when all the individuals value the spirit of being equal can women really enjoy equality with men。
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男女平等是人們的美好夙愿，但什么才是真正的平等?怎樣促成平等的實(shí)現(xiàn)?一些女權(quán)主義者們所倡導(dǎo)的能帶來(lái)真正意義的平等嗎?這是文章要告訴我們的。
文章觀點(diǎn)比較獨(dú)特，向進(jìn)行了一個(gè)多世紀(jì)的女權(quán)運(yùn)動(dòng)提出了質(zhì)疑。開(kāi)篇亮出了觀點(diǎn)，明確表態(tài)�！癗owadays，feminism has been running for over a century．Result?It ran into the extreme of‘equality' from my perspective．”在第二段寫(xiě)到女權(quán)運(yùn)動(dòng)在現(xiàn)今社會(huì)的產(chǎn)物，進(jìn)一步指出，“It is unwise，or even stupid，to ignore a11 these differences and pursue a so-called ‘equal world~”，并且附加了兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)潔有力的事實(shí)例證，加強(qiáng)這一論述觀點(diǎn)。到此為止，文章的論述都是有條有理的，但文章接下來(lái)就急于結(jié)尾了，而對(duì)于什么是真正的平等，和如何促成平等的實(shí)現(xiàn)，幾乎是一語(yǔ)帶過(guò)，只寫(xiě)到，“What really counts is equality in rights，reputation，etc．”沒(méi)有展開(kāi)任何的論述，感覺(jué)是指出了問(wèn)題，卻沒(méi)找到真正的方向，最后一段的論述空洞，沒(méi)有說(shuō)服力，讓人覺(jué)得虎頭蛇尾，實(shí)在可惜。
文章中的關(guān)聯(lián)詞使用得不多，從語(yǔ)言表述方面也還不夠成熟。英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言是一種“chain laneuaee”，而準(zhǔn)確、恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞是語(yǔ)言學(xué)習(xí)是否步入一個(gè)成熟階段的衡量指數(shù)，這也是該習(xí)作要注意提高的地方。
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