英文簡(jiǎn)歷殺手

英文簡(jiǎn)歷殺手

1."I am the best candidate for the job."

“我是適合這份工作的最佳人選。”

At the resume stage, this is an irresponsible and presumptuous thing to say. Obviously, you don't know who else is applying for the job or how your qualifications stack up. Say instead, "I am very interested and believe I'm qualified for the job." Then, use the next sentence of your resume or cover letter to say how.

在簡(jiǎn)歷上說(shuō)這句話是很不負(fù)責(zé)任、過(guò)于自負(fù)的行為。很明顯，你不知道還有哪些人在應(yīng)聘該職位，也不知道你的條件是否比得上別人。你可以這樣說(shuō)：“我對(duì)該職位非常有興趣，并且我相信我有資格勝任此份工作。”然后，用簡(jiǎn)歷上的下一句話或者求職信來(lái)說(shuō)明你符合資格的原因。2."I have a proven track record of success."

“我有成功的經(jīng)驗(yàn)。”

Apart from its 10-out-of-10 rating on the Legendary Clich scale, this sentence makes no sense. What other kind of track record is there? There's no such thing as an unproven track record. The "success" bit on the end only lowers the perceived IQ of the writer. Replace this boilerplate phrase with a story about something specific you did to help your last employer.

除了是百分百的陳詞濫調(diào)外，這句話沒(méi)有一點(diǎn)意義。還能有什么樣的業(yè)績(jī)記錄呢？未被證實(shí)的記錄壓根就不存在。用在句尾的“成功”一詞只不過(guò)讓別人覺(jué)得筆者的智商低。還是詳細(xì)地描述你曾經(jīng)做過(guò)的對(duì)你前任上司有幫助的事情來(lái)代替這一陳詞濫調(diào)吧。